FIRE

 

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3 - Building on fire

Good focus

Nice lines

Definite subject

Framing

Nice colors

 

4 - Fiery log

Sharp focus

Log too centered

Too straight across the picture

Fills the frame

 

2 -  Wheat fire

Soft focus

Be better if wheat really stood out in silhouette

Quite a bit of area with no detail

Weak composition

           

1 -  Bonfire

            No focus in the background or the foreground

            Scratch on negative

            No central focal point

 

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